So I have made a major decision about my original story "The Draven Files." Basically, I started writing that story in my sophomore year of high school (which was going on 6 years now) and my writing style was VERY different then. I left too much up to circumstance, a lot of what happened in the plot depended on luck, and I don't like that. I like to have a really good explanation for what happens in my stories. Like... in the beginning, he is on a plane, and Sadie's following him. Where the fuck is he coming from? Why did he leave? Sadie's just following him? He's a vampire...
yeah, so I've decided I'm going to completely rewrite "The Draven Files." Yes, that means I will be removing it from DA. I thank the people... well, person who read it. But I really do want to get my literature published one day, and it just isn't good enough. To be even marginally successful as a writer, you must be extraordinary. So that's what I'm going to do with TDF v2.0. A lot of the things that happened will reoccur in the new version, just in different circumstances. It probably won't be posted on here fo quite some time, probably close to a year. So I guess thanks to Moz for always reading them, ctitiquing, and giving all around good advice.
I shall post a bigger, badder, better version of the story for your enjoyment sometime down the road. Tchao!
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Thank you so much for sharing your art
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ART against RACISM Project 2009 [link] by *thestargazer23
thanks for informing me :-]
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"Oh what a fool I was to think immortality meant never dying," the vampire William, from my novel "The Vampire Prince."
I don't now if you care, but I'd like to ask you to take a look at my contest
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ART against RACISM Project 2009 [link] by *thestargazer23
wow... that gave me a pleasant image...
anyhoo... holler back.
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"Oh what a fool I was to think immortality meant never dying," the vampire William, from my novel "The Vampire Prince."
But you don't have to draw the boys nor you have to know the lyrics, you just have to take the song's title and imagine...whatever you want!
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ART against RACISM Project 2009 [link] by *thestargazer23
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Bazzin'!
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"Oh what a fool I was to think immortality meant never dying," the vampire William, from my novel "The Vampire Prince."
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"The world is full of Kings & Queens who blind your eyes and steal your dreams." Black Sabbath, 'Heaven & Hell'
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